I trusted you
I adored you
I cared for you
I loved you so
But I should have known
I should have known
Until the truth
Dropped like a bombshell
And jolted me to reality
I should have known
That you had been
A deception
A false hope
A mere illusion
Deluding my psyche
With your subtle pretenses
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The Daily Prompt – False.
Peace and Love!
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Pain pain.pain… loved it
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Oh yes, it was pain, pain, hurt, oh dear!!!
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I can understand my love…
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I love this so much. So honest and so real.
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Yeah, it was one of those complex things about life. Thanks for stopping by. I appreciate. Xx
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Mine may not have the pathos of yours dimple….but it does have humor. ~~dru~~
https://saywhatumean2say.com/2016/06/26/song-for-guy-from-long-long-ago/
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Yours was a blend of humour and creativity and I loved it. Both poems anchored on one thing – Heartbreak which was a sad tale. 🙂
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The hurt felt familiar…I could so identify with it…beautiful…loved it
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I guess it’s quite relatable as heartbreak has kinda become a ‘normal’ with relationships… Thanks for reading and commenting. Much appreciated. Cheeres! Xx
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AH! So profound on more than one level: I’m thinking of how we deceive OURSELVES, how we embrace the lies of our spiritual enemy Satan, and how our 21st century culture pressures us into images that are not real!!! (I work with a 6th grade girls’ club at my school called “Girl emPOWERment” and this is very relevant!) Thank you for this!
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You’re welcome. Glad to know its relevant to your girls club…they should be equipped with the right info to curb such experiences. Often times we see the true images, but ignore them and tell ourselves that everything will be fine until the whole thing implodes. Sadly, but that’s the way of life. Thanks. 🙂
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love this!
On Fri, Jul 8, 2016 at 10:16 AM, Giggles & Tales wrote:
> simpledimple posted: “I trusted you I adored you I cared for you I loved > you so But I should have known I should have known Until the truth Dropped > like a bombshell And jolted me to reality I should have known That you had > been A false hope A mere illusion Deluding my psyche W” >
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